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Raghu, might be a metaphoric pilgrimage of life. The pilgrims start out. They
find the pilgrimage so "exalting" to their minds that all their "burdens"--their
physical burdens of pilgrimage and their metaphorical burdens of woe, care, worry,
illness, poverty, or whatever else life presents as a burden--grow "light." The burdens
undergo a metamorphosis: they become what they are not; they become the opposite of what
they are.
"The second stage" refers to the second stage of
the pilgrimage. The pilgrims have been journeying and thought is free to roam as bodies
become weary. The initial exaltation yields to a reasoned exploration of their beliefs
and of the "call" to pilgrimage. Again, employing the double meaning of metaphor, the
call is on one level the call to pilgrimage, while on a second level (like the second
stage) the call is to a direction of participation in life, a chosen course or path
through life.
While the pilgrims explored the call on both
levels, they did not "test," or challenge, the call. No pilgrim challenged or questioned
the purpose or value of the pilgrimage, while on the metaphorical level, no pilgrim
challenged the purpose and value of life. Perhaps in their exploration of the call,
questions were raised, but no challenges were hurled down because of the questions. In
the final line it is abruptly discovered that before the exaltation and during the
exploration of the call, there was rage, rage over the thing or things that prompted the
holy pilgrimage or quest, which are the exploration of spiritual value and meaning and
the metaphorical quest for meaning and value in life.
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the importance of phrases, Ezekiel does an interesting thing in this stanza. He starts
out with a joyous emotion (exaltation) then moves to its aftermath (contemplation,
exploration), and lastly reveals the preexisting underlying emotion of anger. This takes
the reader by surprise and may force some to reread the lines to see what they missed or
to see how the lines fit together as the introduction of anger seems unusual after
starting out with a celebratory tone of exaltation.
Another
instance of the importance of phrases is the idea of a "second stage" in conjunction
with exploration that is then immediately opposed by testing (or challenging), which
means to put to trial the quality of a thing (Dictionary.com) or to justify the truth or
value of a thing. The opposition of "explore" and "test," one being emotionally passive
or neutral and the other being emotionally negatively charged, foregrounds the
possibilities of either wavering conviction to ideals or barely restrained opposition to
ideals, suggesting another more active ideology.