What an excellent essay. It does have a few grammatical
errors in it to correct before turning it in. Here are some of my
thoughts:
In the daily grind of simply living through
another twenty-four hours, this simple magic can cure the ills of the individual's
personal world.
Without these brief, magical interruptions
to our daily existence, life would hold much less
meaning.
This time to laugh, ponder, and thrill to an
unknown world can vastly improve our own small
universe.
Without this magic to draw us from our shells, we
would, indeed, be a dull folk.
I hope some of these will
spark your own unique ending for your own, unique essay. I so agree with it. While
studying for orals for my master's degree, I took time out to see an obscure movie
called Great Scout and Cathouse Thursday ( I think that's the
correct day of the week) with Lee Marvin. I laughed so hard, it cleared my cluttered
mind to cram a little more in. And, yes, I did pass my orals!
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