Friday, July 3, 2015

Rewrite the following sentences so that related ideas are expressed in similar or parallel structures.Computers are used to analyze voice patterns,...

You need to clarify what is being "used" in each part of
the sentence.  If you add that verb to the second half of the sentence that becomes more
clear, and you will have created a parallel structure.  If you also use the infinitive
form for the verb, "to + verb" in each clause, then you create another parallelism in
the sentence.


Computers are used to analyze voice patterns,
and the patterns are then used to compare to those on record.

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